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The first day of your new school. Little 16 year old you. You and your mum had moved due to the fact she could get a way better job with a much better pay. The school that you went ot now had 2 uniforms one for the girls and 1 for the boys. Considering you and your mum hated the girls unoform he had the crazy idea of making you look like a boy and fooling everyone in your school. You being the crazy person you are agreed.So there you were standing infornt of your new school looking at the gates that opened you to a new world of being a boy.

~~~~~~~~ hai this is a flash back ^^ (your with your mum at the hairdressers) ~~~~~~~~~

"So like what do you want for your hairstyle?" asked your polish hairdresser.
"I'd like to get a boys haircut please" you said winking at him. he gave you a funny look and then shrugged it off
~~~~~~~~~~~~ time skip in a flashback XD ~~~~~~~~~~~~

"OMG i love it!!!!" you shouted after getting your hair done. You got out of your seat and hugged the hairdresser.
"Its like ok you look like amazing" he replied hugging you back. you got off him and waited for your mum to pay.

~~~~~~~~~~~~ End of flashback (       :'(       ) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You walked down the well kept path that had flowers down the sides. The school looked really posh and it had a massie clock tower just on the right of the school. You walked to homeroom and bumped into a blonde kid wearing glasses and a bomber jacket.
"Oh im terribly sorry" you apologize holding your books close to your chest. he turned around.
"Oh no sweat dude so are you a new kid or something?" he asked pushing up his glasses.
"Oh yes im (Boys first name) (last name)" you said holding your hand out to shake. He ignored your hand and slung an arm around you instead.
"I'm Alfred F. Jones!". in the force of the hud you dropped your books. You bent down and started sprawling to pick them back up.
"Oh let me help you" a small voice came from infront of you. you looked over to the source and found a lovely pair of violet eyes behind some glasses looking at you.
"Oh well thank-you" you said standing and shuffling your books.
"My names Matthew Williams im Alfreds half brother" that calm tone said to you once more. He handed you the books and you neatened them up.
"It's very nice to meet you Matthew and Alfred" You said happily.
"DUDE!! would you get on with Arthur or what?!" Alfred said grabbing your books.
"I heard my name" said a strong british accent.A boy with blonde hair and BIG eyebrows that somehow complimented his face turned around and faced you.
"Dude this is (boy name) (last name), He's a new student here! and one of my new besties" Alfred said pushing you towards him.
"Wait what wer're freinds?" you asked turning around to face him.
"Yeah sure dude!" you noticed he said 'dude' way to much. You turned around to face Arthur again.
"Hello it's very nice to meet you Arthur" you said holdin out your hand.
"Well at least someone at this school has manners, pleasures all mine" He said grabbing your hand and shaking it lightly.
"Dude, whats your homeroom?" Alfred asked.
"Oh it's with Mr. Braginski!" you said walking down the corridor with your new 'freinds'.
"Oh wow you have the same homeroom as us and the Bad Touch Trio." Arthur replied groaning the last part.
"Whos the 'Bad Touch Trio'?" you asked heading to your homeroom.
"US!" you heard a group in unison say. You looked uo to be greeted by three men. One albino, one tanned one and one that gave the aura of a pervert.
"Well that clears things up" You chuckled heading past them.
"Kesesesesese~ So whos the new kid?" you heard one of them say. Was that meant to be a laugh? You turned around and greeted them properly.
"Hello i am (Boys name) (last name)" You held out your hand for them to shake.
"Gilbert Beilschmidt" The Albino said. You could tell he was German.
"Antonio Fernandez Carriedo" The tanned one said. You could tell he was spanish.
"Francis Bonnefoy" The 'Pervert aura' one said. You could tell this one was french. None of them shook your hand so you pulled it back to your books.
"It's nice to meet you all" You said turning back around to your new freinds.
"Hey (boys name), don't get to close to them they're all assh*les" Alfred whispered to you.
"Don't worry Francis gave out a pervert aura" you said laughing. Matthews eyes widened. you noticed but shrugged it off.
"So whats Mr. Braginski like?" you asked opening the door.
"You'll soon see" said Arthur walking in behind you.
"Ah good morning new child i see you've joined my homeroom?" asked a russian man with a long brown coat and long pink scarf.
"Oh um yes i have i am, (boy name) (last name). Its very nice to meet you Mr. Braginski." you said happily.
"You know what i like you call me Ivan." he said walking away smiling.
"Wow dude you got a great first impression on Mr. Braginski only a few of the kids at school get to call him Ivan like wag Yao and Raivis Galante (latvia) and now including you." Alfred said sitting down on what looked like their 'usual' table. Arthur gestured to a seat next to him. you sat down and layed your books on the table. you sat there chatting away until matthew intterupted you.
"H...hey (boy first name) could i talk to you for a minute." he said standing up.
"Oh yeah sure" you replied and stood up and walked over to the back of the classroom. An ears distance from Gilbert.
"I need to ask you something." Matthew said trying to cover up thats he was scared to ask you.
"Yeah whats wrong Mattie?" you asked grabbing his right shoulder and rubbing it with your thumb.
"a...are....you...a girl?" he stuttered out. Your eyes widened and Gilberts ear pricked up listening into your conversation.
"H-how did you know" You said walking up to him and lowering your voice.
"Well when you said Francis had a pervert aura you laughed and it was high pitched but no-one apart from me noticed." he replied.
"Oh god please don't tell anyone ill do anything" you whispered.
"It's allright you don't have to worry i just needed to confirm it" Matthew replied.
"Thanks Mattie" you said walking him back over to the table. As you were walking back a hand grabbed your wrist. You looked back and Gilbert was looking straight at you.
"What do you want Gilbert?" you asked sternly. As his red orbs stared at you you couldnt help but lower your guard by turning around to face him. Francis was standing behind him they both had smirks plastered to their faces. They walked up and pinned you to the back of the room.
"KESESESESESESE~ I heard your little convosation" Gilbert said letting go of your wrist and running his hand through his silver hair.
"Oh you did" you replied blushing.
"Ohonhonhon Little (boys name) is blushing how cute" Francis said with his hands on his hips. Ivan noticed that they were 'bullying' you so he decided to join in.
"I hope your not bullying little (boys name) if you are ill kill you both" Ivan said holding what seems to be a faucet and smiling creepily.
"It's allright sir we were just asking (boys name) a question" Gilbert and fracis turned around to face sir wich gave you an oppertunity to escape. You walked back over to the table to find Alfred looking in your sketch books.
"Wow dude your an amazing artist" he said tracing his fingers over some of your sketches.
"Oh well thank-you" you replied snatching it away from him. The bell went and you stood up and gathered your books, you walked out with your freinds and to your first lesson.
"Hey (boys name) we will tak to you at lunch non~" Francis said winking at you.The lessons you had that day until lunch: History, Art, (break), Maths, English. And then dreaded lunch All of lunch you were looking out for the Bad Touch Trio. you finally found them getting fussed over by a buch of girls. you walked over and most of the girls looked at you. A few 'Squeed' at you gut you just shrugged it off.
"Wow the new kids so cute" Said a girl with brown hair. 'Wow i even make girls squee' you thought to yourself. You walked up to Gilbert and stared him in the eye you were taller than him by about 2 inches.
"Wow hes even taller than him" another girl Squeed. You smirked.
"You wanted to talk to me" you said sternly.
"Ja! kesesee Antonio talk to these lovely ladies me and Frncis need to talk to (boys name).. Alone!" he said walking you over into a small room.
"Right you got me here what do you want to talk about..." you asked hastily.
"Well what are you going to do to make sure we don't blabber to everybody." Gilbert asked pinning you on the wall standing to your right.
"Oui how do you know we wont tell everyone." Fracis said standing to your left.
"Because you avnt told Antonio" you said Smirking.
"We didn't tell Antonio because he would have told everyone by now" Gilbert said pushing closer to you.
"well wat do you want me to do?" you asked blushing.
"Come over to my house after school and wear something girly" Gilbert said leaning in closer to you.
"Hey (boys name) where are you?" you heard a faint British accent say from the corridor.
"I have to go, Arthurs looking for me" you said walking inbetween them. Gilbert grabbed your wrist and handed you a piece of paper.
"Heres my address" he said seductivley.
"Oh right yeah Thank-you" you replied walking out of the door.
"What did THEY want with you?" putting an emphisis on they.
"Oh they were just asking me something" you replied putting the piece of paper in your pocket.
"What about?" he asked.
"Oh i have to....."You thought for a while. "TUTOR i have to tutor him in maths".
"Oh ok then we should get back to homeroom the bells about to go" Arthur said walking down the corridor. you walked closley behind him wondering what Gilbert was going to do to you tonight. You both got to homeroom before the bell and you saw Matthew inside.
"hey Matthews inside and Ivan" you said walking in.
"HEY MATTIE HEY IVAN!" you shouted waving to them.
"Oh Bonjour" Matthew replied.
"Oh hello" Ivan Replied.
"PARTAYY!!" came a loud abonoxious American hugging you and Arthur.
"Hi Alfred" you said "whats with the party?".
"Im having a party at my folks' house and i want all of you to come" He replied letting go of you and running over to the table. 'Oh god no! if they see you out of school they'll find out your a girl' you thought to yourself. Then the bell rang taking you out of your trance.
"Dude this party is gonna be awesome" Alfred said just after the bad touch trio walked in. Gilbert heard what Alfred said and walked over to you.
"Im sorry but (boy name) will be with me after school" Gilbert said wrapping his arm around you. You slightly blushed.
"H...hey!" you said getting him off you."
"Kesesesesese~" he said walking over to Antonio and Francis. The bell went signalling last lesson.
"See you later guys" you said walking over to the door heading out to Geography. After Geography you headed to the gates waiting for your mum to come in her (fave car). You leaned on one of the columns with your right foot on the column. A small girls with black hair and red streaks came up to you blushing wildly.
"hmm" you said looking at her.
"um...(boys name) would you please accept this?" she said handing you a black rose. as she brought it up to your face you blushed wildly.
"Of course i will accept such a beautiful gift from a girl as equally beautiful, would like a kiss on the cheek?" you asked taking the rose. She looked at you after you said the last part blushing wildly.She nodded slowly. You leaned in closer to her and touched her cheek with your lips. As you moved away from her she was red all over.
"Was that nice?" you asked her. She nodded.
"Th..THANK-YOU!" she shouted before running away to a bunch of more girls. 'Well kissing a girl felt funny maybe i should explore my sexuality'. As you were kissing the girl you hadnt noticed your mum roll up in the car. You walked over to your mum as she smiled to you.
"What are you so happay about?" you asked throwing your bag on the back seats.
"Looks like my little *cough* boy got a girlfriend-"
You interrupted her. "HEY! shes not my girlfriend sh gave me this rose so i gave her a kiss on the cheek" you said holding up the rose.

As you went home with your mum you told her about your friends and how 2 of them knew you were a girl. You also described how Gilbert was seeing you tonight. you mum just kept joking saying you should wear the french maid outfit your lesbian auntie got for you last christmas. you both chuckled and got to the front of your house. You walked in and put your rose in some water. You went to your room to get changed. you walked in took off your blazer and blouse and looked at yourdelf in the mirror. To hide your breasts you wore a corset like thing with strings. you actually had quite large breasts and it hurt when you took it off but it felt so good. you put on a black and white lacey bra and took off your pants revaling your matching underwear. you walked over to your wardrobe and examined your clothes. 'DAMMIT WHY DON'T YOU HAVE AYHTING GIRLY?!' you mentally shouted to yourself. the
only thing girly was the french maid dress. oh well. you chucked on a (fave colour) tank top and Black skinny jeans with a red studded belt. you comebd you (h/l)(h/c) hair and examined yourself in the mirror. you nodded your head i approval.
"MUM!! im going over to Gilberts" you shouted getting the paper form your school pocket.
"Ok babe be home please dont get killed..." your mum chuckled.
Ok mum" you said walking out of the door. you walked into the hallway and put on your (fave colour) converse. you walked out of the house and looked at the piece of paper.
"well time to find Gilberts house" you said to yourself. After about and hour of searching and asking for directions you noticed a blonde man walking down the road with 2 dogs.
"Oh well it can't hurt to try again" you said to yourself walking up to him. He looked at you and stopped walking his dogs.
"umm excuse me in looking for Gilbert Beilschmidts house" you said stroking one of his dogs.
"oh really?" he said with a confused look on his face.
"yes i was meant to go to his house after school ive been searching for like an hour" you said straightening up and smiling.
"No joke hes mein Bruder" he said walking past you and dragging you along.
"Wow he didnt mention a brother!" you said pulling up your bra strap.
"And he didnt mention a beautiful lady coming round i would have cleaned up" he said laughing. You both talked on your way to Gilbert and Ludwigs house. He opened the door to let the dogs in and then you.
"Oh Danke" you said using some of the german you knew.
"AHHHHHHH!!!!!! (Boys name) your finally here! iv'e been waiting so freaking long wow boobs" said Gilbert from the stairs "Come on up!". You took off your shoes and headed upstairs trying not to blush from him complimenting your boobs. Gilbert was outside of his room waiting for you.
"Nice choice of clothing there!" he said walking up to you. Sliding an arm around your hip and leading you into his bedroom.
"So (boys name) what agree-"
"(girls name) please my real name is (girls name)"
"Oh ok, So (girls name) what do you want to do to make me not blabber?" he siad sitting you down on his bed. you noticed a bird on his pillow.
"OH my god! your bird is so cute" you said stroking its head.
"Yeah thats the awesome gilbird" he replied.
"How did i guess you'd name it after you?" you said laughing. Gilbird woke up and flew right over into Gilberts hair.
"Aww that makes you look even cuter!" WAIT WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY?! did you just call Gilbert cute?
"Umm danke i think" he said taking Gilbird off his head and placing him on yours.
"Now he makes you look cuter" He replied trying not to blush.
"So how are you not gong to tell anyone? what do i have to give?" you askedhim stroking Gilbird.
"..well...i....i want you....." He stuttered. WAIT WHAT?!
"Wh..what?!" you shouted standing up nearly making Gilbird fall off.
"Im sorry i just... ive liked you since i found out you were a girl and well i just want to have you if you dont agree you know what will happen" he said with lust filled eyes taking Gilbird off your head. He walked over to the door and whispered something to Gilbird before closing the door and locking it.
"So that all i have to do?" you replied with the same lust in your eyes. He walked over to you and pinned you against the wall holding one of your wrists. You took him by suprise by smashing your lips against his. he was a little stunned but eventually kissed you back. he licked your bottom lip asking for entrance of course you gave it to him. he explored everypart of your cavern makking you moan a little. This obviously turned him on as he started bucking his hips against yours. you both parted for air.
"Should we take this to the bed mein liebe" he asked.
"Ja!" you replied mimicking him. He led you over to the bed and crawled above you. he kissed you again and started lifting up your tank top reavealing your bra. You removed his shirt expsong his well toned body. you blushed as you ran your finger over his chest. he slid a hand behind your back to undo your bra. When the heard the click he slid it off exposing your (_) cup breasts. He liked his lips in appreciation before placing one hand on your left breats and placing his mouth on the right, slowly licking the bud making you groan in pleasure. he did this for alittle while before getting off the bed and removing his trousers and boxers revealing his allready hard member. while he did this you removed your belt and black skinny jeans revealing your soaked panties. Gilberts crawled between your legs and rubbed your vital regions making you moan louder than before.
"Wh....what about ludwig?" you panted.
"Oh don't worry about mein bruder ive allready told him to listen to music" He replied rubbing cicles and smirking.
"Ngrhh Gilbert..." you whispered. That wasnt enough he wanted you to scream his name. He took off your panties and threw them to the side. His tounge touch your area making you want more of him inside od you he started lapping up your juices.
"Mmmm Sie schmecken so gut, ich will mehr..." he whispered.
"Gilbert please stop teasing me take me...TAKE ME NOW!" You shouted.
"of course mein leibling" he replied crawling up your body leaving kisses along your stomach and cheast. He placed himself at your entrance.
"Is this your first time?" he asked sweetly. you nodded. "Well this si going to hurt at first just tell me when i can move".You nodded again. He slid him self in and you yelped out in pain. At first the paint shot through but it was soon replaced with pleasure. You nodded your head giving him the signal to move. he pulled half out then pushed it in. He repeated that movement over and over again.
"Gilbert harder please" you shouted this still wasnt enough for him he wanted you to scream his name. He pounded you harder and harder, faster and faster.
"Gilbert im getting close" you maoned.
"Ja me too" he replied. He cummed seconds after you.
"GILBERT!" you screamed. Finally he was satisfied. after a few more thrusts he pulled out and lay down next to you.
"Ich liebe dich (Girls name)," He whispered.
"I love you too," you replied. After about 5 minutes of cuddling you got dressed and told Gilbert that you have to go home. You stood at the door and hugged him.
"I have to go home now" you said. bit your neck leaving a very prominent love bite.
"see you at school tomorrow" he replied.
"Yeah" you said kissing him. you walked out and over to your house. after a 20 minute walk you got to your house. walking in you tried to hide the love bite with your hair but it was no use. It's just to short.

~~~~ next day at school~~~~

There you were in boy form waiting for Alfred, Matthew and Arthur to meet you at the school gates.
"YO!! (boys name) whats up?? you missed an awesome party!" alfred shouted.
"I hate to agree but hes right it was good" Said Arthur. "oh looks like you had a little party of your own" he said looking at your love bite.
"WOW! dude got laid and hes only been here a day real stud" alfred joked hitting your back...
"Yeah stud" you whispered......
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WHY IS THIS SO FREAKING LONG!?!?!?!?!?!? it was only meant to be a short story... :icongermanyfacepalmplz::iconaustriafacepalmplz:...........

I know i suck at lemons don't comment.....

THANK-YOU FOR OVER 1'000 VIEWS IM SO HAPPY ^_^ + the 100 faves i cant thank-you more for that ^^

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It was a really good story. Well written too. I especially love the whole 'Tomboy' Reader. Those ones are always good. Please, don't stop writing, keep up the awesome work! I hope to indulge in more of your stories when I can later on. Your work should be more appreciated. You should appreciate yourself in all the world that you do. You aren't bad at all. You need to have more confidence in your writings. You should do a Romano x Tomboy!Reader sometime, but then again, that is just my suggestion. I hope you enjoyed writing this! Bye! Have fun.
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Well first of all it's a cute story.

I just have a few major problems with it.

GRAMMAR & SPELLING: One of my biggest pet peeves is wrong grammar. I hate it when my grammar's wrong, and I hate it even more when I see wrong, and utterly horrifying wrong grammar in a story. Make sure to check your spelling before AND after you submit. Just because you didn't see anything wrong the first time, doesn't mean that there may have been mistakes you accidentally overlooked.
So proper use of punctuation marks, capitalization, and spelling are a must.

STORY FLOW: Okay, I had this problem when I was writing my first story. I didn't know how to put the story well together and it turned into a mess. The story seems a bit rushed, try to connect each part so that readers won't be going 'WAT.'
So make sure to see if the way you put things together works well, and it isn't some big, confusing, mushed up mess.

OOC-ness: Okay. I know a lot of writers/cosplayers/roleplayers/etc. have a hard time getting 'into the character'. I should know I'm a writer, and I roleplay different kinds of character with different personalities. (I even have to suit people's 'needs' in a fanservice roleplay account I run.) But even so, you have to make sure that you try to make the dialogue and how the character/s act as 'in character' as you can possibly do.
Just try to get into the character, when writing their dialogue/reactions/etc. There are the exceptions of course for the, dark!, sad!, snapped!, etc. But even if they're supposed to act differently don't make it TOO drastic.

MARY SUE-ness: The reader seems TOO perfect at some parts. Give the reader some flaws, although we want to be perfect, us readers would still like it to be a 'little realistic'. Reader-inserts are an escape for us fangirls (or boys. I guess.)
Basically try to make the reader not so flawless.

THAT'S IT. There's lot's of stuff to work on, but good luck!
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~VivaLavidaLotta 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I've once had a short hair in 7th grade, my crush thought I was a boy :iconcryforeverplz:

Awesome story bro~ even Prussia approves~ :iconprussiawinplz:
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=AliciaTheHedgefragon 2 days ago  Student General Artist
Oh no that must have been awful XD

Thanks though ^^
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:iconolivertheshota524:
This fits me... I work in my mom's shop sometimes, and a lady asked me where the changing rooms were and after I showed her, she said "Thank you, sir". xD Plus I have extremely short hair. ^^;
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=AliciaTheHedgefragon Apr 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Wow that must have been awkward XD ive been mistaken for a boy once but i think it was an accident XD
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:iconolivertheshota524:
It was. xD I just said "You're welcome" and ran.
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fan freakin tastic story bro!
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=AliciaTheHedgefragon Mar 27, 2013  Student General Artist
thank-you that means alot to me ^^
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~Alissy123 Mar 24, 2013  Student General Artist
1. Think of your crush
2. Make a heart with your hands
3. Kiss the heart
4. Put the heart where your real heart is
Tomorrow your crush will ask you out
This will only work if you post this on your favorite article
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~kishukittygirl May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
...did it work?
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